Its pretty bad man, let me tell you why:
1. It lacked any sort of coherent plot
2. The animation was absent, other than him zipping across the screen
3. The music overlaps when you replay the flash
4. Too short
5. Play and Replay buttons were identical
6. No Background
This really doesn't need to be on Newgrounds. Next time you make a flash, try to watch it after you've made it, and see if you enjoyed watching it other than for the fact that you made it. If you DON'T want to watch it, what makes you think other people would?
Hey, if people didn't want this to be on newgrounds, they would have blammed it. It's not been blammed. I agree with your six points, though.
This had a really good idea for a plot, executed perfectly. I usually never give 10/10 stars, but this had me laughing out loud in real life. Nice job
The animation is pretty good, as well as the drawings. It may just be me, but there are far too many flash animations on NG that have the "random" as their main plot. And the music needs to be fixed so it isn't ear-death to headphone users.
Yea, sorry for the lack of originality bro. haha. It's just that I used random in my titles for like 4 years. My series on youtube is called Randomness. But I know what you mean. One can only be so random without it getting old.
Simply Not Worth It
There was no entertainment value in this whatsoever. The animation was unskilled, the plot was ... absent, and the title doesn't really make any connection to the film. The only good part was that it didn't repeat at the end and that the voices were clear.
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